Thursday, August 21, 2008

Northwest Blues

The Curlew Lake Murder/Chapter One
An early morning rains had blanketed the lake and surrounding mountains with much needed relief from the heat and bone dryness of late August. Thick gray clouds began to break-up by afternoon. The wind blew in forceful gusts from the North West, pine trees sway as if slow dancing to the music of an unseen band. By nightfall the stars were shining with a brilliance few city folk have the privilege to experience.
Driving fast on the winding road over Sherman Pass and turning at Pine Grove Junction, Carl Edwards was oblivious to any beauty Ferry County had to offer. As a city man born and raised, his thoughts tended to focus on only one thing. Money! How he made money, when and on what to spend money, and where to get more, even if he had to steal it. To Carl, money was a game. He never lost because he never played by the rules. His business dealings were always kept strictly confidential.
The new light blue Fox Audi glistened in the moonlight. He punched the gas peddle hugging the inside curve of a sharp s-turn, pushing the car down a short straight-a-way at seventy miles an hour. The car responded smoothly as he did the same thing on the next turn, barking the tires leaving the outside turn. His smile vanished at the sight of several Mule deer caught in the headlights. Swerving into the other lane in order to miss them, tires squealing, he fought to control the Audi by not touching the breaks. His screaming vulgarism went unheard.
“Not tonight, you son’s of bitches. Nothing tonight is going to spoil my celebrating.”
With a half-empty bottle of Jack Daniels remaining in a vice grip between his inner thighs, he reaches for the cigarette lighter, fumbles with a pre-rolled fat joint. A pink plastic bag of newly purchased porn CD’s had scattered across the passenger seat and lay helter skelter on the Audi’s dark blue carpeting.
Three startled bucks with trophy racks, leap down the highway embankment and trot into a clearing. They stop for a moment to watch the fast moving car, weaving tail lights disappear around a tree lined curve.
“Almost Home.” He sighs, slowly releasing the long held drag. Driving back from Seattle via Spokane and Colville, most of his weekend had been spent with lawyers signing multiple copies of court papers. The rest of his time spent on phone calls to business associates, dinner, and the night with a high price hooker. He wasn't looking forward to being alone in his almost completed three thousand square foot lakeview log home. A Montana contractor was working on exterior finishing touches, while Salon24, a British Colombia company worked to finish their designer furniture placements. The way he saw it was like this: he would call his real state contract lawyer first thing in the morning, call Highpoint N.C. about the custom-made leather sofa chairs that were late in shipping, and maybe get a few hundred dollars shaved off for his aggregation. Both companies were behind seclude. He took another short puff, held it, exhaled while fingering the window buttons on the arm rest, and flicked the three quarter joint into the night sky.
“Something for the locals.” he sneered and turned onto the newly graveled driveway.
The log cabin with a massive rap-around porch looked like a lodge brochure from a fancy Vale Colorado ski lodge. True, the view of the lake from his hill top perch was worth much more than the rock-bottom price he had paid for the property. What he had spent building his summer retreat, “The McMansion”, the locals called it, was between him and his account. At eleven o’clock on a Sunday night several smaller homes around the lake were dimly lit.
The peaceful stillness seemed spooky to Edwards. In the past several weeks he had stayed at the cabin, he still couldn't get used to the quiet. At night he played the cable entertainment channels to keep himself company. Music blared to the early hours of the morning.
His high-rise apartment in Seattle had already been leased to a Los Angels oil company’s hotshot executive. That deal was a little to smooth to suit his bird dog noise for trouble. Another conspiracy scheme to mull over, because something about the deal just didn't add up.
Driving into the three-car garage, he bumped the front bumper into a low stack of plywood lumber he hadn’t seen.
“Shit! Stupid contractors.” He slurred his words in an evil tone. “If there’s so much as a scratch on the bumper, I suuuu the fuckers.” Business deals, Atlanta, Boston, Baltimore, and San Francisco, were swimming in his alcohol-befuddled mind. Stepping out of the car in the darkness, the whisky bottle shatters on the concrete.
“I’ll makem’ pay for that too. Why in the hell didn’t the weekend crew leave a security light on? It’s piss black in here.” Unhappy at the thought of getting whisky on the souls of his new Italian loafers, Edwards slams the car door and walks around to the passenger side, opens the door and gathers up the scattered CD’s.
“This” is for that local weasel subcontractor Sandy Berky and his dysfunctional wife. He holds up a glossy jacket CD. Gag Factor #2, the title is easy to read in the Audi's dome light. "Give him an idea what I think about him, the money-grubbing son of a bitch. Thinks he can screw me? Hah!”
Thirty-seven-year-old Carl Edwards slams the Fox Audi’s passenger door at the same time a flash appears from the far corner of the garage. gggGun! He spins around seeing, one, two, three more flashes of light with a sharp clapping sound accompanying each flash. The stack of porn CD’s cascade to the concrete, making a louder noise than the silencer on the Victor High Standard 22 automatic. Edward’s knees stiffens as he jerks. Pissing, he’s dead before he drops to the cold garage floor.
A wide red flashlight beem sweeps back and forth, stopping at spent brass casings. One, two, three, and four, each 22 longrifle cartridges is picked up. The red beam is switched off. The smell of gunpowder, sagebrush, and pine trees, mingle with the smell of fresh blood and urine.
A lone shadow weaves through the sagebrush below Edward’s highpriced garish McMansion. Softshoed footsteps crunch on hard gravel, mingling with coyotes singing in the moonlight.

7 comments:

Anonymous said...

not very well liked...this person!
great story!

The contractors shot him!

It's lines like these:

*pine trees sway as if slow dancing to the music of an unseen band*

that seperate you from the rest.

pnk

susan said...

Intrigue! The plot thickens. Now all I have to learn is...what the hell makes a good plot.  :)The contractors may have disliked poor old Carl(may he rest in peace.) He was paying them hi-dollars for their work, and usually people don't kill off the one who fills their rice bowls. Sooo, no it wasn't any of the contractors. But please don't tell any of my New York best seller readers. We don't want to spoil their enjoyment of the book.What do you think about using the charactors introduced in "Huckleberry Brew"? We have the locals, the rich clueless flatlanders(coastys as they are called here), and the Federal Government guys. And of course there are several other key charactors that haven't been introduced as yet. One of them dances with wolves and owns an Olympic High Standared Target Pistol. 

Anonymous said...

ha! That's a great idea to incorporate all of the characters or just Huck and MJ..?? (I liked the preist too)

I was kidding when I said the contractors...Because Carl was swearing at them just b-4 he died.

The plot thickens to me, when the story goes one direction and then it changes to another or new direction that perhaps the reader didn't think of...imo
Which you do a lot, which keeps the interest.

Hey! I enjoyed our talk today, thanks for calling!

:)

talk to ya soon!
enjoy your evening..ya..
*wolf whisperer*

pnk

Aye said...

Ha!!! I read this last night, then was thinking today that I hadn't left the comment I'd meant to!!! That was my first thought when I read it (even though none of the other characters were involved.... that we know of, at least), wondering if it was connected to Huckleberry Brew and Yellow Bucket Seats. See, the other thought I'd had was a .22 long was a strange choice of weapon for a hit, but now a bit more of the fabric of the plot has been woven with the mention of a Standard Target Pistol.

I used to own an Audi Fox. Bought it from my grandparents-in-law for $400. The sunroof was so full of rust it wouldn't open until I vacuumed it extensively. Lost the oil plug on the freeway and froze the engine (same engine style that is in my poor Scirocco, only not transversely mounted!!!), and ended up trading it to one of my co-workers for a pound of low grade cannibis :Þ Of course, that was YEARS ago...

susan said...

Remerber Wolf Man Jack? Ahoooo!Pank, I enjoyed talking to you too. The husky Lauren Bacall type voice with a New York accent was a nice surprise, and I'm looking forward to talking to you again soon.I'm planning to incorperate a whole bunch of new twists and turns in the story... Aye, you old scallywag... High Standard is a Hartford, Connecticut Company, the Victor 22 Long Rifle pistol is almost as heavy as a 44, or 357 magnum, only it fits more comfortable in a shoulder hoster. You can shoot 22 short "pop-corn" rounds for inside target practice and high powered long rifle hollow points for getting the job done, plus it leaves less of a mess.There is a nice SAAB convertable for sale on a service station lot in Republic going to waste. It reminds me of a Balitmore university business professor. We parted ways in New Orleans after she tried to drop a dime on me. She got away with my cell phone. That cost me twelve hundred dollar in phone calls I didn't make. She forgot her raincoat, high heels, checkbook and all the cash in the B&B office safe...I never saw her again to give her stuff back. If she had told me the truth, and not tried to pulled a drama act by lieing, I would have gladly driven her to the airport. It was an intellectual blond teaching experience for me. I did enjoy the James Joyce and Fitzpatric conversations tho.A pount of low-grade "showbizz"!!! Were you rooked, or was it a fare trade?

Aye said...

Guess you'd call it a fair trade. I wasn't about to do an engine swap on a $400 car, and probably wouldn't have gotten $50 for it from the junkyard. At least it wasn't a pound of oregano, although I could have done some cookin' with that!!!

susan said...

Oregano! Blend in some premium-quality: marjoram, savory, thyme, basil, rosemary, and last but not lest, sage, then look out..."Classic Italian Dishes."

For the Classic Latin American lovers, give me a pound aromatic Cilantro.
Hot Salsas!!! With fresh picked tomatos, green and red peppers, sweet onions and a whole lotta homemaded outdoor oven-baked tortillas.
One of my favorite memories as a kid was patting out stacks of corn tortillas with my mother and her friend Barbrilla Moore. My mom and dad picked cotton and grapes with the Moore family. Good Times! We didn't even know we were poor. Barbara even showed my mom and me how to use a mano and matetto(spelling?)to grind maze while my Dad and Mr. Moore sat on the pickups running board with their bare feet in the hot sand drinking sweet port wine telling stories in spanish. And yes, I remember the smell of the funny weed they smoked in their hand-rolled cigarettes. No wonder they were so hungery and kept stealing the tortillas as we took them out of the adobe outside oven. It had a native name, but I have forgotten what it was called. The one thing I'll never forget is the feeling of being loved and surrounded by friends and family.
When I worked in a latin dental lab in San Jose, the ladies would bring in salsas they made at home. Thinking they could "burnout the white chick".
"Chula, try Mary Chewé's salsas." I knew they really liked me because I was the only one there that had the courage to tell the asshole pervert owner to keep his grubby hands to himself, or I would call the labor board.
"Don't make no trouble Chula, we need our jobs, we have children at home to feed."
I was clueless to their situtation at the time.
They fed me home cooked meals, and continued to try and burn out my tongues tastebuds with flaming homemade salsas.
"Chula, even my husdand says this salsa is to hot." God knows, he was probably right. With my eyes and nose dripping, I'ed strip down to my tank top to cool off and barely be able to squeek out, "Your man is a pussy Mrs. Hernandez... your salsa is wonderful." I can remember them roaring with laughter.
I suspect most of the ladies didn't have green cards, but they didn't have to worry about the greasy lab owner making them pay to keep their jobs by bowing to his sexual advances.
Chrismas time was the best. Every night for several week there was a different family get-to-gether. I couldn't speak very good Spanish, and most of the ladie's families didn't speak very good English. For me it was a taste of home that I lost at an early age.
Those lady's home made Mexican food was wonderful, as was their family's Latin hospitality.
"Lo digo y lo sostengo... good memories of long ago."